Her hair flowing like a waterfall,
So shiny and distracting that it made me fall.
As i sat down and looked in front,
Love tunes started ringing in my mind
Such was her radiance in which I was lost
that the mirror behind her left me aghast.
It said,
Go to sleep you little fool,
She deserves more than your drool. (Literal translation for jollu =p in a desperate attempt to make things rhyme)
Just an another day, just an other guy,
But this one was different and his eyes couldn't lie.
They were brown and nervous and he looked so shy,
But one look was enough to catch my eye.
When I looked at him, he closed his eyes,
leaving me alone with the monster in the glass.
- Ah, a post after a long time! :)
14 comments:
Naice and random. Me likey! =)
nandri nandri :)
Vivid imagery, confusion, desperation, desire, nervousness, secrecy and the mind's desire to burst that veil. All of these elements make me believe that you drew inspiration from this : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FJx_bWgQDrU
Haha I do agree that sone songs were in my head:P
:) i loved the poem.
Hey! Thanks! Rainmaker? :P who is this
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Haha! :D I loved it, and yeah you were able to reach to the readers :D So fickle our hearts =)
Haha! :D I loved it, and yeah you were able to reach to the readers :D So fickle our hearts =)
Haha! :D I loved it, and yeah you were able to reach to the readers :D So fickle our hearts =)
Haha! :D I loved it, and yeah you were able to reach to the readers :D So fickle our hearts =)
Haha! :D I loved it, and yeah you were able to reach to the readers :D So fickle our hearts =)
Haha! :D I loved it, and yeah you were able to reach to the readers :D So fickle our hearts =)
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